Hero speech

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13 Responses to Hero speech

  1. akhta1 says:

    very good presentation and good thought out speech

  2. idrer says:

    I like your work

  3. eodriscoll says:

    Well done. This is a very thoughtful piece of writing, and it proves that anybody can be a hero. Pay close attention to use of punctuation and capital letters when you write your blog. I know you are accurate in your Literacy book.

  4. mohai says:

    I like this but what you should do is make a different colour next time because you cant really see it that well

  5. irfai says:

    Aadil yours is the best I like the coulors

  6. alif says:

    I like the colours of your presentation

  7. dass says:

    I really loved it how you two worked as a team but at the end you should’ve said by rio and aadil

  8. anila says:

    The second half was great but the first half of the hero speech as good as the second because it was missing capital letters.

  9. hasaa says:

    I love your piece of work 🙂

  10. alia3 says:

    🙂

  11. alia3 says:

    and I am Arman

  12. alia3 says:

    really good work

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