great work
I like that you mentioned a hero doesn’t need to be big or even have super powers. Pay close attention to your punctuation when you blog, I know use this accurately in your Literacy book.
I like the way you your words and improved the words.
It was good, just next time remember your punctuation
your hero speech is very good:)
from Alex in class 4I
Nice work now focus on using capital letters
some of it does not make sense but it is REALLY GOOD
I loved the colour and your work!
Don’t forget capital letters:(
You never used capital letters 🙁
I really loved your work and I was proud
your story is really good but change the colour of your writing
good story
but a change a colour like red or pink like a colour not so shiny
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great work
I like that you mentioned a hero doesn’t need to be big or even have super powers. Pay close attention to your punctuation when you blog, I know use this accurately in your Literacy book.
I like the way you your words and improved the words.
It was good, just next time remember your punctuation
your hero speech is very good:)
from Alex in class 4I
Nice work now focus on using capital letters
some of it does not make sense but it is REALLY GOOD
I loved the colour and your work!
Don’t forget capital letters:(
You never used capital letters 🙁
I really loved your work and I was proud
your story is really good but change the colour of your writing
good story
but a change a colour like red or pink like a colour not so shiny