Hero speech

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18 Responses to Hero speech

  1. idrer says:

    You used good information.

  2. hasaa says:

    great post it is cool and I like all of your word choices!

  3. eodriscoll says:

    A well written and well planned hero’s speech. I am impressed with the way you connected your ideas and by your word choices. I hope you share this piece of writing with your family, I am sure they would like to comment.

  4. yusaa says:

    you used lots of detail

  5. alif says:

    I really like the words you have chosen
    🙂 🙂 🙂

  6. ahmel1 says:

    you planned it well I liked yours alot

  7. dass says:

    I loved your details and the words of the choices you added Inaaya

  8. dass says:

    I loved the hero speech you done

  9. sivas says:

    🙂 I like your work

  10. ashra says:

    Great work Inaaya
    I love your chosen words
    You make me feel like I am Ruskin
    🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

  11. sathk says:

    Great work! I can see that you thought of Ruskin in the first person:) 🙂

  12. ashra says:

    🙂

  13. alia3 says:

    its some epic work you have done well done

  14. haqua says:

    I hope you use more intrestimg verbs

  15. tariz1 says:

    Fantastic writing Inaaya, I really like it.

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