surabhi 100 word challange

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3 Responses to surabhi 100 word challange

  1. nanand says:

    What a lovely twist to your story Surabhi! I was hooked straight away by your emotive theme. Well done

  2. Secret Book Club Member says:

    This is my favourite story. You have mastered the skill of capturing the reader completely. Your structure, plot, language, vocabulary choice and story pace is perfect. Reading this, I could clearly picture the girls, the service and their Grandma’s twin ghost paying respects to their beloved Nan. I am in admiration of your skills, well done. I look forward to reading your next tale.

  3. suthl says:

    I LIKE YOUR STAORY SURABHI IT IS VERY SCARY. I ECPELLALY LOVED YOUR SETTING. THE VOCABULARY WAS VERY NIC E

    BY : LAKSHITHAA

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