This is my favourite story. You have mastered the skill of capturing the reader completely. Your structure, plot, language, vocabulary choice and story pace is perfect. Reading this, I could clearly picture the girls, the service and their Grandma’s twin ghost paying respects to their beloved Nan. I am in admiration of your skills, well done. I look forward to reading your next tale.
What a lovely twist to your story Surabhi! I was hooked straight away by your emotive theme. Well done
This is my favourite story. You have mastered the skill of capturing the reader completely. Your structure, plot, language, vocabulary choice and story pace is perfect. Reading this, I could clearly picture the girls, the service and their Grandma’s twin ghost paying respects to their beloved Nan. I am in admiration of your skills, well done. I look forward to reading your next tale.
I LIKE YOUR STAORY SURABHI IT IS VERY SCARY. I ECPELLALY LOVED YOUR SETTING. THE VOCABULARY WAS VERY NIC E
BY : LAKSHITHAA