Well done Romasa , you made great use of descriptive language to draw me into your spooky story. Remember to use a capital letter after an exclamation mark.
A great little tale, I love the dialogue, ” Robot Pirates destroy them!” After reading this part of the story I had a picture in my head of Iron Man style Pirates attacking the poor girls in the castles hallways, this just shows how successful you were in engaging the reader, well done.
Well done Romasa , you made great use of descriptive language to draw me into your spooky story. Remember to use a capital letter after an exclamation mark.
A great little tale, I love the dialogue, ” Robot Pirates destroy them!” After reading this part of the story I had a picture in my head of Iron Man style Pirates attacking the poor girls in the castles hallways, this just shows how successful you were in engaging the reader, well done.