Saachins speech

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2 Responses to Saachins speech

  1. eodriscoll says:

    Well, done Saaching. You have put a great deal of thought, time and effort in this piece of writing. Continue using a variety of conjunctions to connect your ideas.

  2. ahmez1 says:

    very good. Now think of including similes and metafors

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