Rio and Aadil this is a lovely, colourful piece of writing. I like how you described how size shouldn’t affect your ability to be a hero. Now focus on using capital letters accurately and by using conjunctions to join your ideas.
Great work
WHEN I WAS IN YEAR 4 I DONE THIS AND I REALLY LIKE THIS PIECE OF WRITING LIKE LIZARDS LURKING UNDER THE STREETS
HAFSA 5B
Hi fist of all , you should try to use readable colours and try to add punctuation overall the description is hooking and imaginative
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Kind Regards
Zia 5B
wow mind blowing stuff there carry on with that I like when you said with great powers comes great responsibility love it. MICAH 5B 😀
that is realy good
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Rio and Aadil this is a lovely, colourful piece of writing. I like how you described how size shouldn’t affect your ability to be a hero. Now focus on using capital letters accurately and by using conjunctions to join your ideas.
Great work
WHEN I WAS IN YEAR 4 I DONE THIS AND I REALLY LIKE THIS PIECE OF WRITING LIKE LIZARDS LURKING UNDER THE STREETS
HAFSA 5B
Hi
fist of all , you should try to use readable colours and try to add punctuation overall the description is hooking and imaginative
😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀
Kind Regards
Zia 5B
wow mind blowing stuff there carry on with that I like when you said with great powers comes great responsibility love it. MICAH 5B 😀
that is realy good