Rio and Aadil this is a lovely, colourful piece of writing. I like how you described how size shouldn’t affect your ability to be a hero. Now focus on using capital letters accurately and by using conjunctions to join your ideas.
Great work
WHEN I WAS IN YEAR 4 I DONE THIS AND I REALLY LIKE THIS PIECE OF WRITING LIKE LIZARDS LURKING UNDER THE STREETS
HAFSA 5B
Hi fist of all , you should try to use readable colours and try to add punctuation overall the description is hooking and imaginative
Kind Regards
Zia 5B
wow mind blowing stuff there carry on with that I like when you said with great powers comes great responsibility love it. MICAH 5B
that is realy good
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Rio and Aadil this is a lovely, colourful piece of writing. I like how you described how size shouldn’t affect your ability to be a hero. Now focus on using capital letters accurately and by using conjunctions to join your ideas.
Great work
WHEN I WAS IN YEAR 4 I DONE THIS AND I REALLY LIKE THIS PIECE OF WRITING LIKE LIZARDS LURKING UNDER THE STREETS
HAFSA 5B
Hi
fist of all , you should try to use readable colours and try to add punctuation overall the description is hooking and imaginative
Kind Regards
Zia 5B
wow mind blowing stuff there carry on with that I like when you said with great powers comes great responsibility love it. MICAH 5B
that is realy good