I like the way you introduced yourself to the reader. You used adjectives and connectives effectively.
Now pay close attention in typing I with a capital letter and including even more detail in your hero speech. I would have loved to read more about the characteristics of a hero.
I like the way you introduced yourself to the reader. You used adjectives and connectives effectively.
Now pay close attention in typing I with a capital letter and including even more detail in your hero speech. I would have loved to read more about the characteristics of a hero.
Good work and you have use conjunctions really well, make sure your sentences make sense…
Great work! You have used great adjectives to describe Ruskin Splinter. You have used awesome adjectives and cool connectives.