Lost by Sachien

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4 Responses to Lost by Sachien

  1. nanand says:

    Fabulous use of imagery in your spooky story Sachien. Make sure you check for typos.

  2. Secret Book Club Member says:

    An excellent read, you have used your thesaurus carefully and wisely to avoid repetition and increase the rich vocabulary packed into your 100 words. Well done.

  3. gandz says:

    I like your work Sachien, I liked your descriptive language and powerful adjectives. Just check a few spellings to improve. Zaeem

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