A great response to the challenge, which is perfect for Halloween! You have used the ‘as it shivered, they’ prompt well in your story. Next time, take more care with capital letters and other punctuation to help the reader.
I really enjoyed this story, especially the editing you made with the tales ending, the decisions and alterations you made there really worked, well done. I wonder if they are still running?
A great response to the challenge, which is perfect for Halloween! You have used the ‘as it shivered, they’ prompt well in your story. Next time, take more care with capital letters and other punctuation to help the reader.
I really enjoyed this story, especially the editing you made with the tales ending, the decisions and alterations you made there really worked, well done. I wonder if they are still running?
thank you for that perfect comment