A very nicely written, well structure tale, well done. Try in your next tale to use some new vocabulary to help increase the readers engagement in the story without over running the word count. I really liked the phrases, “Without a single blink” “They were chattering along” I look forward to reading your next tale.
Hi Hamzah Its Somran,
I really liked how you used words it has a very good mood !!
It would paint the picture in your head
Next time remember to check your Caps.
From Somran
Well done Krish,some great use of careful word choice in your creepy story. Remember to check your punctuation!
A very nicely written, well structure tale, well done. Try in your next tale to use some new vocabulary to help increase the readers engagement in the story without over running the word count. I really liked the phrases, “Without a single blink” “They were chattering along” I look forward to reading your next tale.
Hi Hamzah Its Somran,
I really liked how you used words it has a very good mood !!
It would paint the picture in your head
Next time remember to check your Caps.
From Somran