Ghosts eating police officers and then burping! Reminds me of Ghostbusters. I know how hard you worked on your story structure and the words you picked to tell your story when writing it up in your paper book. Please make sure when finally publishing your tale on this blog you take just as much care so that your wonderful stories are not mixed up.
Some great detail but you need to read your work back to check it makes sense- lets edit it together
Ghosts eating police officers and then burping! Reminds me of Ghostbusters. I know how hard you worked on your story structure and the words you picked to tell your story when writing it up in your paper book. Please make sure when finally publishing your tale on this blog you take just as much care so that your wonderful stories are not mixed up.