Hi Junior,
This is a great way to introduce the best hero to your reader, you used details to influence my opinion of him and give me clues about the role he will play in the story- the sign of a talented writer.
Try to vary your sentence starters.
Keep up the great work.
Mrs M
Hi Junior,
This is a great way to introduce the best hero to your reader, you used details to influence my opinion of him and give me clues about the role he will play in the story- the sign of a talented writer.
Try to vary your sentence starters.
Keep up the great work.
Mrs M