Hi Gia, I love the way you used details from the story to influence my opinion on the new character and explain who he is; this gave me clues about what may happen next. Talented writers do this! Think about varying sentence structures. Mrs M
thank you mrs moore, that was so great feedback to improve my work I will try and think about that the next time I do my work thank you
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Hi Gia,
I love the way you used details from the story to influence my opinion on the new character and explain who he is; this gave me clues about what may happen next. Talented writers do this!
Think about varying sentence structures.
Mrs M
thank you mrs moore, that was so great feedback to improve my work
I will try and think about that the next time I do my work
thank you