The Mysterious Day

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5 Responses to The Mysterious Day

  1. Imaan.Janjua says:

    WOW! I really like your description and complex choice of vocab. From: Imaan Janjua
    you have used speech! Class: 6E.
    Also you have used several types of punctuation and capital letter. :):):):):):)
    keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  2. sheem says:

    I like how you have used punctuation and commas I really enjoyed reading this piece of work well done!

  3. Boss says:

    hello there nice work you got there this is from year six I like it

  4. ravir says:

    Well done:)
    I really like the plot of the story.

  5. chouz says:

    well done you used speech marks in your text.

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