😀 A very strong atmosphere. 🙂 Great word choice. 🙁 Maybe vary sentence length and right shorter sentences.
Hi Junior, You’ve introduced the Prince well and placed him right at the centre of the action and you have used detail to influence your reader’s opinion. Think about how varying sentence starters could help.] Keep it up. Mrs M
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😀 A very strong atmosphere.
🙂 Great word choice.
🙁 Maybe vary sentence length and right shorter sentences.
Hi Junior,
You’ve introduced the Prince well and placed him right at the centre of the action and you have used detail to influence your reader’s opinion. Think about how varying sentence starters could help.]
Keep it up.
Mrs M