I LOVE THE SUSPENSE AT THE END I ALSO LOVE THE PHRASE SHIMMERING JEWELS
Hi Rakeen, Some lovely descriptive phrasing to influence my opinion on the new character and clues about what will happen next. Your sentence structures are a little confused, remember to edit before you publish. Mrs M
Ok, I’ll try to make sure my sentence structures make sense. 😀
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I LOVE THE SUSPENSE AT THE END I ALSO LOVE THE PHRASE SHIMMERING JEWELS
Hi Rakeen,
Some lovely descriptive phrasing to influence my opinion on the new character and clues about what will happen next.
Your sentence structures are a little confused, remember to edit before you publish.
Mrs M
Ok, I’ll try to make sure my sentence structures make sense. 😀