Hi Iva,
What an interesting way to introduce your prince to your reader; you certainly made it clear who he was looking for and gave me plenty of clues as to what could happen next.
Try to use language typical of the type of text you are writing.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
Hi Mrs Moore,
I’m also really proud of my work I think I really improved my writing, I also want to read more from my own story.
I think that I put a lot of really descriptive adjectives, and that makes me proud.
I will try to use typical writing next time.
Hi Iva,
What an interesting way to introduce your prince to your reader; you certainly made it clear who he was looking for and gave me plenty of clues as to what could happen next.
Try to use language typical of the type of text you are writing.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
Hi Mrs Moore,
I’m also really proud of my work I think I really improved my writing, I also want to read more from my own story.
I think that I put a lot of really descriptive adjectives, and that makes me proud.
I will try to use typical writing next time.
Hope you enjoy my story.
Hope you enjoy my story.
Hope you enjoy my story.
Hope you enjoy my story about the prince.