Hi Olimaron, This was a great way to introduce the prince to your reader, by telling me what he did you made me think he was very brave. You used dialogue well too. Don’t forget question marks . I enjoyed reading this, well done. Mrs M
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Hi Olimaron,
This was a great way to introduce the prince to your reader, by telling me what he did you made me think he was very brave. You used dialogue well too. Don’t forget question marks .
I enjoyed reading this, well done.
Mrs M