This was a great original response to today’s task; I like the way you used the opposite of the problem to give your reader clues about what was going to happen.
Next time think about using language that is typical to the style of writing you are being asked to produce.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
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Hi Kayshap,.
This was a great original response to today’s task; I like the way you used the opposite of the problem to give your reader clues about what was going to happen.
Next time think about using language that is typical to the style of writing you are being asked to produce.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M