the prince by Khalisah

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  1. nanand says:

    Hi Khalisah,
    I love the way you have introduced the prince to your reader and just by telling us his reaction made us aware that he is a good guy; this is the sign of a talented writer! You also used descriptive language and simile well.
    Next time think about using semi-colons instead of all the commas.
    Well done.
    Mrs M

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