Kerem I love this! What an epic battle. You used dialogue and action well to move events on and used little details to imply things to me about the characters. There are some missing commas. I really enjoyed reading this. Mrs M
thanks miss next rime I will use more punctuations
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Kerem I love this! What an epic battle. You used dialogue and action well to move events on and used little details to imply things to me about the characters. There are some missing commas. I really enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
thanks miss next rime I will use more punctuations