I really like your description maybe you could check your puncuation
next time use one colour to highlight it. I love your description great use of adjectives and punctuation.
Haha! I can just Caspar the cat doing flips in the air! Zahra I love the way you described all the chaos such an event would cause. Next time think about paragraphs and when to change them. Mrs M
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I really like your description maybe you could check your puncuation
next time use one colour to highlight it.
I love your description
great use of adjectives and punctuation.
Haha! I can just Caspar the cat doing flips in the air!
Zahra I love the way you described all the chaos such an event would cause.
Next time think about paragraphs and when to change them.
Mrs M