MALEEHA THIS IS REALLY GOOD I LOVE THE ADJECTIVES IT’S GREAT DESCRIPITION TRY EDIT BECASUE I SPOTTED A CAPITAL LETTER MISSING
Maybe you could tell us how it all happened. Great use of punctuation I like your description :):o
Hi Maleeha,
This was a great piece of writing, you used description really well and feeling. Remember to check spelling. A really enjoyable read, well done Mrs M
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MALEEHA THIS IS REALLY GOOD I LOVE THE ADJECTIVES
IT’S GREAT DESCRIPITION
TRY EDIT BECASUE I SPOTTED A CAPITAL LETTER MISSING
Maybe you could tell us how it all happened.
Great use of punctuation
I like your description
:):o
Hi Maleeha,
This was a great piece of writing, you used description really well and feeling.
Remember to check spelling.
A really enjoyable read, well done
Mrs M