Hi Rakeen,
This was a great way to respond to the prompt; I like the way you manoeuvred between the narrator and third person and used such precise descriptive detail to help me picture things in my mind. Next time think about what tense you need to use when you talk of the past of the past.
An enjoyable read.
Mrs M
I like how you described the evil prof.
Hi Rakeen,
This was a great way to respond to the prompt; I like the way you manoeuvred between the narrator and third person and used such precise descriptive detail to help me picture things in my mind. Next time think about what tense you need to use when you talk of the past of the past.
An enjoyable read.
Mrs M