JINAN YOU USED GOOD ADJECTIVES I LOVE THE DESCRIPTION LIKE PLEADED AND HOVERING TRY USING A DIFFERENT WORD THAN PECULIAR
HAFSA
Hi Jinan, I really like the way you gradually built the tension in your story and used the narrator’s voice. Try varying sentence starters Mrs M
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JINAN YOU USED GOOD ADJECTIVES
I LOVE THE DESCRIPTION LIKE PLEADED AND HOVERING
TRY USING A DIFFERENT WORD THAN PECULIAR
HAFSA
Hi Jinan,
I really like the way you gradually built the tension in your story and used the narrator’s voice.
Try varying sentence starters
Mrs M