I liked your description:) I liked your descriptive words:) I think you could make it a bit longer 🙂
That is AMAZING!!!!!!! Just next time check your work 😉
Hi Zareenah, I really like the way you gradually built the tension in your story and used the narrator’s voice. Try varying sentence starters Mrs M
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I liked your description:)
I liked your descriptive words:)
I think you could make it a bit longer 🙂
That is AMAZING!!!!!!!
Just next time check your work
😉
Hi Zareenah,
I really like the way you gradually built the tension in your story and used the narrator’s voice.
Try varying sentence starters
Mrs M