Hi Zia,
This is quite an action-packed story that is full of detail, it doesn’t however meet the brief of the task. Think about what the task- use the picture to help.
Mrs M
Dear Mrs Moore ,
I will conceder this and I will apply this to my written work and blogging work
I think I am using your advise wisely and I hope it will help in my work
Hi Zia,
This is quite an action-packed story that is full of detail, it doesn’t however meet the brief of the task. Think about what the task- use the picture to help.
Mrs M
Dear Mrs Moore ,
I will conceder this and I will apply this to my written work and blogging work
I think I am using your advise wisely and I hope it will help in my work
Kind Regards
zia 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀