Hi Zaynab, I love the way you described your and your sister’s reactions to the events using such clear detail. Think about how you can include elements later to keep your reader guessing. I enjoyed reading this. Mrs M
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Hi Zaynab,
I love the way you described your and your sister’s reactions to the events using such clear detail. Think about how you can include elements later to keep your reader guessing.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M