The I on its own has to be a capital letter.
😀 Good use of 3rd person 🙂 Great humor 🙁 Check for errors
Hi Leon, You have used humour well here and the narrator’s voice to draw me into the action of your story, however you have forgotten to punctuate, read it back and add in commas when you pause. Mrs M
thamk you for the description and for the comentes
HI Leon , You have used humour well I think you need to read over before you publish to check for errors.
From Arjan
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The I on its own has to be a capital letter.
😀 Good use of 3rd person
🙂 Great humor
🙁 Check for errors
Hi Leon,
You have used humour well here and the narrator’s voice to draw me into the action of your story, however you have forgotten to punctuate, read it back and add in commas when you pause.
Mrs M
thamk you for the description and for the comentes
HI Leon ,
You have used humour well I think you need to read over before you publish to check for errors.
From Arjan