😀 Great plot 🙂 Good word choice 🙁 Check for spelling errors
Hi Aman, I really like the idea of magic dust creating such havoc and the way you explained people’s different feelings to finding themselves without any gravity. You have jumped between past and present; make sure you always check for this. Mrs M
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😀 Great plot
🙂 Good word choice
🙁 Check for spelling errors
Hi Aman,
I really like the idea of magic dust creating such havoc and the way you explained people’s different feelings to finding themselves without any gravity. You have jumped between past and present; make sure you always check for this.
Mrs M