Hi Pavan,
I really like the way you told me the back story to the picture; I was intrigued by the scientists and what they were doing. You clear structure and organisation also made this really easy to follow.
Don’t forget to use apostrophes to show possession.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
Hi Pavan,
I really like the way you told me the back story to the picture; I was intrigued by the scientists and what they were doing. You clear structure and organisation also made this really easy to follow.
Don’t forget to use apostrophes to show possession.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
Thanks Mrs M, next time I will remember to use apostrophes
Really interesting piece of writing. The description of Mels experience is highly imaginative and highly creative.
thank you for the feedback on my writing!
Hi Pavan,
This is a very interesting piece of work , you have made this seem so real
From Arjan