Hi Rehana,
Imagine that happening as a result of your homework going wrong! You used the narrator’s voice in a clever way , next time think about adding more precise description and check, not all your verbs are in the correct tense.
An enjoyable read.
Mrs M
Hi Rehana,
Imagine that happening as a result of your homework going wrong! You used the narrator’s voice in a clever way , next time think about adding more precise description and check, not all your verbs are in the correct tense.
An enjoyable read.
Mrs M
Entertaining and imaginative – the writing takes you to another place!
Hi Rehana ,
Your writing has taken me to another place , this is a really funny piece of work. 🙂
From Arjan