Hi Girls,
This got better as the story went on; I love the way you described the girl’s thoughts and feelings as she reacted to what was happening. Remember you can always go back and edit the start if it takes you a while to get into your flow, when typing nobody will ever know!
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
Hi Girls,
This got better as the story went on; I love the way you described the girl’s thoughts and feelings as she reacted to what was happening. Remember you can always go back and edit the start if it takes you a while to get into your flow, when typing nobody will ever know!
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
Very entertaining – the writer manages to take you to a dark place and quickly turns this around. This suggests a skilled and imaginative writer.