Hi Kerem,
Another fantastic piece of writing, love the way you used the characters and narrator’s voice to draw me in. Your clever use of punctuation added emphasis too.
Next time think about the difference between punctuating thought and punctuating speech.
Great job
Mrs M
Hi Kerem,
Another fantastic piece of writing, love the way you used the characters and narrator’s voice to draw me in. Your clever use of punctuation added emphasis too.
Next time think about the difference between punctuating thought and punctuating speech.
Great job
Mrs M