Zia, there is some great exciting detail here but lots of silly errors tell me you didn’t edit before publishing. Mrs M
Zia, this is a good start but the work seems a bit rushed as some of the sentences don’t make sense…you have written ‘why did they not raise there sail as there was a storm’
This is a good start but there are some sentences that don’t make sense…you have said ‘why did they not raise there sail as there was a storm’
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Zia, there is some great exciting detail here but lots of silly errors tell me you didn’t edit before publishing.
Mrs M
Zia, this is a good start but the work seems a bit rushed as some of the sentences don’t make sense…you have written ‘why did they not raise there sail as there was a storm’
This is a good start but there are some sentences that don’t make sense…you have said ‘why did they not raise there sail as there was a storm’