Hi Rehana Some beautiful descriptive language here to create a mood.
How could you use sentence starters to indicate how the story will move on?
Keep it up. Mrs M
Hi Rehana This text is really attention seeking as a wide range of vocabulary has been used however there are some grammatical errors…a comma is not needed in the line, ‘a bird, suddenly flew’. Well done. Losheni
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Hi Rehana
Some beautiful descriptive language here to create a mood.
How could you use sentence starters to indicate how the story will move on?
Keep it up.
Mrs M
Hi Rehana
This text is really attention seeking as a wide range of vocabulary has been used however there are some grammatical errors…a comma is not needed in the line, ‘a bird, suddenly flew’.
Well done.
Losheni