Aman this is a brilliant piece of writing! You really have used descriptive language well to draw me in and create a mood.
I want to know what happens next!
Mrs M
Hi Aman
You have structured your work really well in paragraphs and a lot of descriptive words have been used to grab the reader’s attention. Well done.
Losheni
Aman this is a brilliant piece of writing! You really have used descriptive language well to draw me in and create a mood.
I want to know what happens next!
Mrs M
Hi Aman
You have structured your work really well in paragraphs and a lot of descriptive words have been used to grab the reader’s attention. Well done.
Losheni