Hi Rakeen, Fabulous use of detail in your story to draw me in, you use precise vocabulary really well. Remember to use the past perfect to talk about the past of the past. Mrs M
Hi Rakeen The description and vocabulary used in your writing is exceptional for a year 5. Well done. Losheni
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Hi Rakeen,
Fabulous use of detail in your story to draw me in, you use precise vocabulary really well.
Remember to use the past perfect to talk about the past of the past.
Mrs M
Hi Rakeen
The description and vocabulary used in your writing is exceptional for a year 5.
Well done.
Losheni