Well done yusuf I love your work just improve a little more .
good similes
Great work Yusuf. That is very impressive. But there is a little bit more room for improvement. Other than that well done!
Great work Yusuf that was an amazing story that you have wrote their carry on and you will be a great story witter
I love your work and i like how you put a lot of punctuation in your story and a good picture
that was a really good story try make a number 2
astonishing work I like your pictures how it captures the story I like the punctuation and verbs that you put in the story
LOL! I liked the story because I like lions and lions are so cute LOL.
LOL! I liked the story because I like lions and lions are so cute.
LOL! I liked the story because I like lions and they are so cute.
Well done!!! Amazing work. I must say you have done better than year 5. You just have to makes sure some sentences make scence
Hi Yusuf really good next time colour your writing.
Hi Yusuf , Really good work You put a lot of effort in to this piece of work Well done for trying your best 🙂 Next time try to do some more writing. From Zayd
Hi yusuf realtors good work
Amazing story yusuf!
Hi Yusuf i love your cool pics maybe you might get a drum of your own.
It’s really good to add more information about your story
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Well done yusuf I love your work just improve a little more .
good similes
Great work Yusuf. That is very impressive. But there is a little bit more room for improvement. Other than that well done!
Great work Yusuf that was an amazing story that you have wrote their carry on and you will be a great story witter
I love your work and i like how you put a lot of punctuation in your story and a good picture
that was a really good story try make a number 2
astonishing work I like your pictures how it captures the story I like the punctuation and verbs that you put in the story
LOL! I liked the story because I like lions and lions are so cute LOL.
LOL! I liked the story because I like lions and lions are so cute.
LOL! I liked the story because I like lions and they are so cute.
Well done!!! Amazing work. I must say you have done better than year 5. You just have to makes sure some sentences make scence
Hi Yusuf really good next time colour your writing.
Hi Yusuf , Really good work
You put a lot of effort in to this piece of work
Well done for trying your best 🙂
Next time try to do some more writing.
From Zayd
Hi yusuf realtors good work
Amazing story yusuf!
Hi Yusuf i love your cool pics maybe you might get a drum of your own.
It’s really good to add more information about your story