Hi Angel,
What a lovely story about a seahorse!
You used some lovely story language to help me picture things in my mind.
Next time add commas when you pause.
Well done.
Mrs M
I love your work! You’ve used so many beautiful adjectives. I love the ending where her life finally became normal. maybe you could make the writing clearer! From Avneet
Hi Angel
fab work wow!you cat make it better by making it clear.
but it is great .
from neeha
Hi Angel,
What a lovely story about a seahorse!
You used some lovely story language to help me picture things in my mind.
Next time add commas when you pause.
Well done.
Mrs M
I love your work! You’ve used so many beautiful adjectives. I love the ending where her life finally became normal. maybe you could make the writing clearer! From Avneet
good work
to make it more easier to read you should change the font
Hi Angel
really good story maybe next time make your phonates clear
Hi Angel I really like yor werk weldan from sara.Ali
Hi Angel fab work that’s amazing
great work by neeha
Hi Angel,
I love your work
You did a lot of writing and changed the handwriting! 🙂
WOW! Next time change the colour.
From Zayd 🙂
Hi angle I loved your work when I looked at it.❤
Hi Angel !
I really like the story about the Sea Horse and the flute!!!
Nice idea
from Anushka
Hi Angel
i love your work
maybe next time include pictrues
Hi Angel , I love your work. Maybe next time make the handwriting a bit clear.