Wow Kanishka! You have written a really lovely story, I can just picture a bear painting in the woods!
Next time try to include more description.
Mrs M
Wow Kanishka, You have done some amazing piece of writing!
FANTASTIC!!
Next time try to add some pictures and try to change the color.
Well done 🙂
From Zayd
Write a little more but wow
thank you
Wow Kanishka! You have written a really lovely story, I can just picture a bear painting in the woods!
Next time try to include more description.
Mrs M
well done you have written an amazing story! it is very descriptive and interesting 🙂
What an entertaining story. Your story was really funny, why don’t you try to add some more.
i love your work but you could’ve just put some pictures in and add some punctuation or verbs
good work good use of adjective, verbs and adverbs
very good story carry on I liked your use of different types of words such as adjectives, verbs, adverbs
well done kanishka great work keep it up I like your bear story add more facts and information.
I really like it because it tells me a lot about the bear and his art I love the title because it makes me want to read even more of your storys
hi kanisha
I really loved your story maybe next time you can add more
It’s so good and amazing.
that story is really nice I LOVE IT … even better if you can write more and use good vocabulary.
Well Done!!
Hi Kanishka I like your work but put pictures
Wow Kanishka, You have done some amazing piece of writing!
FANTASTIC!!
Next time try to add some pictures and try to change the color.
Well done 🙂
From Zayd
Hi Kanishka
Fab work but write more.
Do it faster.
Great work
From Neeha
Hi kanishka I really like your work from sara.Ali