Hi Birrah,
This was a lovely story to read , I love the idea of a singing duck! Next time keep it simple so you can expand on the one idea.
You might also want to think about colour, I found the green a little difficult to read.
Well done on your story.
Mrs M
Hi Birrah ,
The idea of a singing duck was amazing!! I can’t believe he went to the theatre and on x factor
A brilliant piece of writing but maybe change the colour.
Cool poster Birrah I love ❤️ it
Hi Birrah,
This was a lovely story to read , I love the idea of a singing duck! Next time keep it simple so you can expand on the one idea.
You might also want to think about colour, I found the green a little difficult to read.
Well done on your story.
Mrs M
very good but is is very hard to read so you might want to change the colour
make a little bit clear ok
I really like your story because there is a lot of describing words and different types of VCOP This stands for vocabulary excreta.
I like your story
Hi Birrah ,
I love the idea of a singing duck!!! But you could have changed the colour; it was a bit hard to read.
Hi Birrah,
I really like your work, It is really interesting I gust think you should read back and fix the little mistakes.
From Misba,
Hi Birrah ,
The idea of a singing duck was amazing!! I can’t believe he went to the theatre and on x factor
A brilliant piece of writing but maybe change the colour.
Super story, I really like the idea of the duck learning to play a flute and learning to sing.
Hi Birrah ,
The idea of a singing duck was amazing!! I can’t believe he went to the theatre and on x factor
A brilliant piece of writing.
Hi Birrah ,
The idea of a singing duck was amazing!! I can’t believe he went to the theatre and on x factor.
A brilliant piece of writing.
well done it was an amazing story. where did you get such a good idea from? to improve your story you could add some wow words in.
Hi Birrah ,
A singing duck that can play the flute!! I can’t believe he went to the theatre and on x factor.
A brilliant piece of writing.
well done birrah nice work you can add a picture next time.
cool poster
hi Birrah
I loved your singing duck story
well done :0
wow good story
well done on your story I loved the part about the duckling going on the X-factor and going to the theatre but the green was a little hard to read : )
Hi Birrah
Your story was really good I loved it and I agree with Mrs M that the colur was a bit difficult to read next you can use black or pink
Hi Birrah
This was a very nice piece of work to read
You did a lot of writing
but you also might want to add pictures
From Zayd
I love it.❤
hi birrah
i like the sounds of your duckling