Hi Rok,
I really enjoyed reading this and loved the idea of an owl becoming a virtuoso on the cello!
Next time try to use more varied punctuation to create effects.
Great job!
Mrs M
wow your story is really imaginative. You can improve it by going over the spelling and punctuation. You can also try and use powerful verbs. well done!
Hi Rok,
I loved your work and I think it is an amazing story,
I also like the bit you showed the owl pulling the string and making a DONG noise.
From Misba
Hi Rok, I enjoyed reading this and I have something to help you make it even better, for you to use more punctuation and read it through and make sure it makes sense.
Hi Rok I really liked your work because of how you described Bob finding the cello and how he learnt to play it. You should also read through your work when you are done because I saw you spelt ‘it’ ‘iit’.
Hi Rok
Like your work, you put a lot of pictures
I also like the way you changed the font.
Its Really good
Next time try to add some more writing.
From Zayd
Hi rok I like your work but you can change the font
Hi Rok I like how you set up your story. You could check your spellings before you publish.
Wooooooooow rom your cool
Hi Rok,
I really enjoyed reading this and loved the idea of an owl becoming a virtuoso on the cello!
Next time try to use more varied punctuation to create effects.
Great job!
Mrs M
wow your story is really imaginative. You can improve it by going over the spelling and punctuation. You can also try and use powerful verbs. well done!
don’t put too much pictures next time remember to put more information on your work
Hi Rok,
I loved your work and I think it is an amazing story,
I also like the bit you showed the owl pulling the string and making a DONG noise.
From Misba
Hi Rok, I enjoyed reading this and I have something to help you make it even better, for you to use more punctuation and read it through and make sure it makes sense.
there are too much pictures next time put more information
Really great story, it really describes everything in detail. But one thing, there is a few spelling mistakes, but apart from that it’s fine.
hi Rok, I loved your work .It is very interesting. But
I think you should add a little bit more punctuation. By Aaliyah
I really like your poster you have a lot of information well done
well done Rok I really like your story really creative you must’ve loved owls!!!!!!;-}
Nice work
Nice work and story.
WELL DONE!!!!!
great use of adjectives!! 🙂
hi rok
I liked how you added lots of detail keep up the very good work
cool rok nice
Rok I am proud of you but look how many leters you put in it from M.A.Folkson
I really loved your work and it was really good!
wow you did very good on this story ! I love that idea of an owl learning to play a cello
I never knew all this. It’s amazing!!!!!!
very good story
I really like this story. It is short but has very good quality
Hi Rok your story was really good next time you can make your story longer and just to let you know that this is how you spell it not iit
Rok I like your story it sounds so brilliant!
Very good imaginative story Rok,try to use some more paragraphs and more commas and full stops
WELL DONE 🙂
Hi Rok I really liked your work because of how you described Bob finding the cello and how he learnt to play it. You should also read through your work when you are done because I saw you spelt ‘it’ ‘iit’.
this is a really nice peace of work well done its really nice
very nice very nice. Really good piece of work well done
I like your pictures.
Hi Rok
Like your work, you put a lot of pictures
I also like the way you changed the font.
Its Really good
Next time try to add some more writing.
From Zayd
Rok your work is amazing.
by Zainab
wow rock
you ve done a great gob maybe you can find a real cello
hi rok wow from kanishka
hi rok I like your work but make it better bye bye
Rok wow!!!
Rok wow!!!
hi rok i really like your poster it is AMAISING from sara Ali
WoW Rok what a lovely story! You should write lots of stories like that. Mummy
Lepa zgodba! Bravo Rok!
babi in dedi
Wow Rok!
you did a great Job!
i like your work because i ve never seen a chello in my house