zain 100 word poem story

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2 Responses to zain 100 word poem story

  1. bhamu says:

    you should remember the first R but everything is just brilliant

  2. ahmei says:

    A great ending, of explaining facts to us about World War 1. A fabulous poem, however you should re-check your great work, but other than that you have a fabulous piece of great work. I also liked the fact that you gave your opinion on what they deserve. Great stuff! Imani (if you didn’t know)

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