that is similar to mine because we worked together but to improve is add even more interesting words.
Abhinav, your work is outstanding; I liked when you described things, showed empathy and created an atmosphere. You could have added bigger sentences and more connectives.
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that is similar to mine because we worked together but to improve is add even more interesting words.
Abhinav, your work is outstanding; I liked when you described things, showed empathy and created an atmosphere. You could have added bigger sentences and more connectives.