Wow, you totally blew me away, I loved the acrostic poem because it was very clear and I got a vivid image in my mind, you could improve by adding more adjectives and interesting vocabulary! A great poem.
Brilliant poem Amaan, I like how you presented the acrostic poem and how you described the soup. On the last small paragraph you did a mistake so you should check it before publishing it.
Wow, you totally blew me away, I loved the acrostic poem because it was very clear and I got a vivid image in my mind, you could improve by adding more adjectives and interesting vocabulary! A great poem.
This is a nice pome, I like the part at the end the little paragraph, you could of used remind instead of remember on the last one.
Brilliant poem Amaan, I like how you presented the acrostic poem and how you described the soup. On the last small paragraph you did a mistake so you should check it before publishing it.