Hi Zayd, Wow! You really built up the tension with your description and used exclamations well. Next time keep going try to use different conjunctions to extend your sentences. I enjoyed reading this. Mrs M
I like you work Zayd keep it up by kaif
Hi Zayd, I love your work! Next time change your fonts From Falak
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Hi Zayd,
Wow! You really built up the tension with your description and used exclamations well.
Next time keep going try to use different conjunctions to extend your sentences.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
I like you work Zayd keep it up by kaif
Hi Zayd,
I love your work!
Next time change your fonts
From Falak