Hi Tawana, This was a really enjoyable read, you made great use of similes to add to your mood-this is something grown-up writers do!
Don’t forget to punctuate thoughts. Mrs M
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Hi Tawana,
This was a really enjoyable read, you made great use of similes to add to your mood-this is something grown-up writers do!
Don’t forget to punctuate thoughts.
Mrs M