Hi Zayd,
I love this! You used excellent detail and dialogue really well to capture my attention. Remember to start a new line if somebody new starts to speak. Mrs M
Zayd
Your story was very scary!….
I am going to check the bedroom walls tonight.
Mum
Wow …..your work is really good Zayd well done
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Hi Zayd,
I love this! You used excellent detail and dialogue really well to capture my attention.
Remember to start a new line if somebody new starts to speak.
Mrs M
Zayd
Your story was very scary!….
I am going to check the bedroom walls tonight.
Mum
Wow …..your work is really good Zayd well done